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LOST LOVE
Contributed by
sassydovebird
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Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 01:04:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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MY SOUL IS BLACK
MY HEART IS BLACKER
NO SUN
SO HAPPY
NO ANYTHING.
LOVE IS GONE
SHUNNED BY ME
NO SUCH THING
DEEPEST HURT.
HATE
DESPAIR
HAND IN HAND
THE TWINS OF BLACKNESS
KILLER OF MAN.
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sassydovebird
... [
2006-01-03 01:04:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: LOST LOVE
(User Rating: 1 ) by lilch4ever on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 10:56:59 PM AEST (User
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I thought your poem was interesting. Nice flow. Good job! |
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Re: LOST LOVE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ravensfire on
Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 03:34:28 PM AEST (User
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Very dark, much sadness. "The twins of blackness" WOWWWWWW. |
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