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Hopelessly Helpless
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 04:51:56 PM in AEST
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Sometimes I wonder what you’re doing
Sometimes I don’t really care
Sometimes I feel as things never change
Sometimes I imagine you were never there
Often I think of you
Often I wish I still knew you
Often the moon hangs low
Often do the rain drops fall in the snow
On occasion I rejoice in this gift
On occasion I embrace the tangible rift
On multiple occasions I have forgotten you exist
On many occasions I have found ways to thrive and persist
But never do I regret one little bit
Never will I forget the constant bullpit
Never does the sun not rise in its proper form
Never meant me any pain or harm
Always will I keep you in lofty thoughts
Always will the costly memories haunt
Always the sacrifice is simply letting it go
Always is the living, and living is the only way to ever know
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Re: Hopelessly Helpless
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 03:22:50 AM AEST
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Sounds a little sad, I suppose. Hope things improve for you this year. Nice write.
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Re: Hopelessly Helpless
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by SmileSkinDeep on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 08:07:43 PM AEST
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good write, I enjoyed it in sort of an ironic way. its nice how one stanza affixes into the next, good rhyme scheme too.
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