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A bodied born
Contributed by
emrekaratasny
on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 04:13:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Chosen a burden of childhood
out goings meant not a reflection
of the “happenings” .
The severe bruise devoted to the meat
and about yellers might not a such heat
yet , the world of other tops
did not mean a much deed .
Separated a soul from a bodied born ,
as the spirit versus itself and torn .
The grave diggers avenges and if so ,
die my the whatsoever people ,
but not blue the blown .
Some dark , done a gorgeous giant ,
What part , none was a delicious night .
Sleep damned things never be waken up ,
an instinct flow , up to the paradise ,
will , though , be a brilliant flight .
Copyright ©
emrekaratasny
... [
2006-01-02 16:13:50]
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Re: A bodied born
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by Kamal on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 10:09:40 AM AEST
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| Hey I really think you should lay off on the meds because this poem is sick you need to spread it... |
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Re: A bodied born
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by the_pied_piper on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 08:54:09 PM AEST
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| the flow is brilliant, but i dont understand what the kamal person said.... that confused me alot... |
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Re: A bodied born
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by candysears on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 07:37:01 PM AEST
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This is an excellent write..
God Bless! |
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Re: A bodied born
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 12:26:16 PM AEST
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| we are of the same mind. i tend to write dark and pesstimistic poetry as well and I liked this poem! |
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Re: A bodied born
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd March 2008 @ 05:35:36 PM AEST
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| I liked the flow of the poem but I'm a little lost. I understand it is about death, (I write poems of such...) But is it murder or your point of view? You have me intrigued. :). *please pm me and let me know. :) Nice write! |
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Re: A bodied born
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by ScorpionFire88 on
Monday, 16th March 2009 @ 01:50:04 PM AEST
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| I love it's darkness. Very deep. Would love to have your personal opinion on my own poetry. (((HUGS))) |
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