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Figures

Contributed by exodus on Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 02:23:02 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

I'm sure fire wasted
It's only seven-thirty

My friends are sure fire losers
Without them I look dirty

The radio's a playin'
My cell phone is rocking my world

My stupid friends won't turn the radio down
And I can't be dramatic for a stupid girl

One things for sure my friends say
"We can get messed up and you can plan on shorty cuz you're gonna forget"

I failed to be content for the sake of faking
And already I see the back of your head still full of regret

I thought I saw you walking
The movie theater portrayed an awful mood

I told my friends, "let's go peeps"
They told me to stop acting like a drama queen prude

So I extinguished my deep love for you
Gathered my wits about my head

I walked straight after I thought about it
Gathered myself but my brain was dead

I walked right into your essence
It just almost knocked me to the straw paper littered ground

You looked down your nose at me
You ripped my heart right out without making a sound

My friends picked me up
Took their peep to finally see the flick

I saw you sitting near the corner where we used to
Sitting next to an Ivy-league, millionaire sponsored jock named Dick

I told my friends I'd give you the finger
And promised them I wouldn't feel apologetic

They got up to leave and said
"Man, you've got to stop being so pathetic"

So I sat there thinking how much I hated you
And how I'd rather not believe one word I had said

I really rather decided that I would be over in the corner with you
But, I'd hope that you were really dead

I chased my friends through the throngs of people
And I pondered what kind of cheese I should get with my whine

I wish I would have flicked you off that night
But, my friends said you would never have read between the invisible lines

I spent too much money just to see a movie
I left with an empty wallet and my head full of self doubt

I hated to admit I wanted to be in the corner
But I'm glad that's settled and I've finally figured you out

Copyright © exodus ... [ 2006-01-02 14:23:02]
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Re: Figures (User Rating: 1 )
by Kamal on Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 10:50:46 AM AEST
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WHOA thanks man because believe it or not your words are my situations and its like advice...

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