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My life

Contributed by roxygirl on Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 10:10:11 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Everything is going out of control
Trying to be the best and never fail
Trying to not to let my dad down
Every bodys counting on me
I wish I was gone some where far away
My life isn't simple
It isn't easy
Trying to go to the top when every one is trying to pull me down
They tell me I'll never be any thing but a piece of ***
I try to fight the words but some times I wish they would just beat me
Everything is going out of control
All I want to do is get high so I don't have to deal with this burning pain
If you looked in to my eyes you could see every thing
From steeling 40's out of 7 eleven
To ***** up in school
Now I'm trying to get my life together and no body cares
They just tell me I'm worthless and to stupid to understand
All I'll ever be is 5'5 with brown eyes
I try to never let them get the best of me
I was shown to never cry and every time I did I would get hit with a wooden bat
I feel like I'm drowning in these emotion
But I swer I will never give up
Everything is going out of control
I know no one cares that I make it or not
Because all they ever say is I'll only be a 36c and flat stomick
But I say ***** all those poeple who look down on me
Cause I'll make it with you or not
PEACE!




Copyright © roxygirl ... [ 2006-01-01 22:10:11]
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Re: My life (User Rating: 1 )
by dc on Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 11:51:25 PM AEST
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Powerful write, Roxigirl
Slow down, see who you are and what you want. Then fight your battles one small one at a time -your eyes are the only ones to judge you.


Re: My life (User Rating: 1 )
by Lin54 on Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 01:13:36 AM AEST
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I see your anger--but want you to know there are those that do care and love to hear that you are reaching to be a better person! I hate to hear people call others 'losers' and just want you to know, I care and know you are special to God and now to me!
You have a way with words and describe your feelings well!

Lin54


Re: My life (User Rating: 1 )
by TREBOR on Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 09:55:21 AM AEST
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Another strong poem

The stregth has to come from within

Love and peace

Bob


Re: My life (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Tuesday, 24th January 2006 @ 08:48:20 AM AEST
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A strong angry poem.


When we shift some blame to ourselves
Only Then
Can we reach the top shelf


Sinned


Re: My life (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 11:59:02 AM AEST
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A strong angry poem.




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