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The Mosquito
Contributed by
trixxx
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Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 09:55:45 PM in AEST
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Funny it does seem to me,
Although far from amusing,
Whose conflagration so confusing
Draws lines of hate I cannot see
Upon the withered night
A breed of twisted silence
Broken by a twisted will.
I lie and wait with deathly still
Lest I should miss the quiet violence
Inflicted on my dreams
Helpless to such hapless aim
That leads a vile, unpleasant fiend
Into my veins, my lifeblood gleaned
For sustenance and worthless gain
Of seconds to a charmed life.
You justify this unlawful trade,
This thievery in awful truth,
Of easy rest and priceless youth;
A morsel of my comfort made
To satisfy thy morbid thirst.
The night such busy work doth bring,
But rest be my priority,
Humbled by supreme authority,
I lie and wait for the troubled sting
Incarnate, by such a little thing.
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trixxx
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Re: The Mosquito
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by Lin54 on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 01:19:04 AM AEST
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I'm afraid that you are much too kind to this vile, unpleasant fiend! Our country home is called 'Mosquito Acres' for obvious reasons and we don't give our lifeblood willingly to the little fiends--We go down fighting! ha ha!
Enjoyed your view of them, though!
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Re: The Mosquito
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by brokenwings on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 05:33:25 AM AEST
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interesting
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Re: The Mosquito
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by Channing on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 04:46:30 PM AEST
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Mosquitos are pests not matter how you look at it, but interesting write.
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Re: The Mosquito
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by amoamare on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 11:26:40 PM AEST
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| such a thoughtful poem. i never really thought about mosquitos that way..... those are the best poems, the ones that provide you with a new perspective. excellent work! |
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Re: The Mosquito
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by europeanprincess on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 02:16:56 PM AEST
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| ok who would of thought of it that way? good poem. made me think. :) thank you for sharing. |
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