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those underground
Contributed by
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 05:20:00 PM in AEST
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Those Underground.
Can hear them hissing, late at
night when walking home from
the bar. *****, fighting, eating
each and screaming obscenity
to the God that made them sewer
rats. They are waiting for a new
messiah who will lead them up to
daylight, to the pledged land of
gardens, houses and larders full of
food as promised in an old fable.
Copyright ©
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
... [
2003-01-25 17:20:00]
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Re: those underground
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 08:24:39 PM AEST
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Mr. Hansen, you painted a vivid word picture!
Not a subject for me, but well done. SusieQ |
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Re: those underground
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by Uncertain_Oblivion on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 11:59:36 AM AEST
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| Dark and disturbing...just the way it should be...I loved it. |
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