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Fading
Contributed by
blain
on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Fading from your mind
Like the merciless sun on morning dew.
Am I but a dull shadow,
Do i still exist to you?
Am i but a tiny drop
In the open sea of endless blue
I am little more than a trail of smoke..
No.
I am but nothing to you.
Copyright ©
blain
... [
2003-01-25 17:00:00]
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Re: Fading
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 06:30:44 PM AEST
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| Blain, I enjoyed your poem, Fading. I like your style, clarity, and brevity. SusieQ |
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Re: Fading
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 08:49:53 PM AEST
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| this is beautiful.. |
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Re: Fading
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by Delusions on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 05:21:22 AM AEST
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| Awsome... |
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Re: Fading
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by Ronald on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 09:28:19 AM AEST
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| I can really feel what you feel in this poem. Good poem... |
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