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Time
Contributed by
BondiDan
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Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 01:27:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Tick Tock
And the year slips by ever so fast
Where do those seconds and minutes go?
To another world where seconds and minutes live?
Or to time heaven where they come and go on this earth as they please?
Each minute made up of pure gold seconds
A pure gold hour leading to the shining diamond of our life
Time comes and time goes bringing joy or pain
Like the soft ebb and flow of waves on golden sand
Each wave crashing, never to return again
The lark sings forevermore upon its branch
Its song sings of beauty while the sun shines its life giving rays
A phone rings.
An alarm goes off.
Time
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BondiDan
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2006-01-01 01:27:05]
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Re: Time
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by emystar on
Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 01:54:46 AM AEST
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Very good writing.
I think we all wonder this.
huggs,
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Re: Time
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 12:41:26 PM AEST
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yeah ... where does it go? it is agonizingly slow when being waited on, and incredulously swift when paid no mind. it makes no sence. you caught it well here. nice read.
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Re: Time
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by rocken88 on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 06:03:57 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem. your words are so well chosen. nice write. |
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Re: Time
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by enigma on
Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 02:56:32 PM AEST
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...I have no idea where all the time goes...but, when it's gone...it is gone...
...think they'll ever figure out what the heck it is????
ron...enigma |
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