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All that was me
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 04:00:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Everywhere I look,
Is the place where you took,
All that was me.
The sad, grim sky,
Is the only place that's high,
To take me away from you.
Broken hearts and mindless teenagers,
Have all been crying and all have been cursed,
Because reality finally kicked in.
But if I cry and you are not there,
All I know is that I"m not scared.
But everywhere I look,
Are the places that you took,
All that was me.
All that was left of me.
....Everything.....
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2005-12-31 16:00:41]
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Re: All that was me
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by brittaney on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 05:10:39 PM AEST
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| Im not sure i quite understand this poem. |
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Re: All that was me
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by Lionel on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 11:51:43 PM AEST
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| Very good. Very expressive. |
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