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Searching
Contributed by
danimus
on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 02:59:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Traveling into the depths of the sea
Searching for you while fighting pressure
When your fourteen thousand feet under me
I ask myself "Should I go further"
Risking my life for a chance to
See you once more like you were
And I'm drowning to love you
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2005-12-31 14:59:55] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Searching
(User Rating: 1 ) by enigma on
Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 03:00:11 PM AEST (User
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...life is a risk...I liked your play on phrases at the end...I'm "drowning" [dying] to love you...
...still playing with it...I'm living to love you...that's what I'm kind of doing right now...well, for the last sixteen months!!! go figure...
ron...enigma |
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