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In The Corner She Finds Herself
Contributed by
injectionxinfection
on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 12:32:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
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She wears all black
And ignores everyone's taunts
Her eyes are dark,
And the only color
Comes from the bracelets on her wrists.....
And she walks around,
While her head is bowed.....
Facial expression shows no pain
But eyes almost bearing tears
Though no one could know
That she is really content
She is fine with the way she is...
Even through all the anger
She is still alive
Even if she doesn't want to be
But is she okay?
Negative thoughts can be positive
And positive thoughts can be negative
So they keep on making her life Hell
But still she wears all black
And bears no pain...
And they continue with their taunting...
And she enjoys it
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Re: In The Corner She Finds Herself
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 01:19:21 PM AEST
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| WOW! this is powerful! Really well done...I could feel the girls pain. Good write! |
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Re: In The Corner She Finds Herself
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by HatchetGirl on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 02:07:54 PM AEST
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| It's unbelievable... how much the girl you are talking about sounds like me... very good write I think a lot of people will be able to connect. |
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Re: In The Corner She Finds Herself
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by shelby on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 02:53:04 PM AEST
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packed with expression that is what makes this so powerful. I admire the part where she is comfortable with who she is. Thats the best place in life to be.
Michelle |
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Re: In The Corner She Finds Herself
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by Estranged-Thespian on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 04:18:28 PM AEST
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| ... That's really, really great. I absolutely enjoyed that. It sound like some people I know- fantastic work. Really. |
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