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Finish What You've Started

Contributed by Kie-Kie on Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 06:37:45 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I don't know what I'd have done
If you were never there
Giving me a shoulder to lay on
Proving someone really did care

I've been lost in the dark for so long now
I never thought I'd see the light
But then you came and took me
To where the stars all shined bright

I'd given up on trying
After all the tears I'd wept
And then you came along
Off my feet was I swept

You took my heart away from me
And kept it for your own
Gave me yours in return
Your true love was shown

I can't believe I'm saying this
With so many years ahead
But there's no one I'd rather be with
Until I'm gone and dead

So take pity on this poor girl
Whose heart resides with you
Take care of it with all you've got
Because she wants this love to be true

So finish the job you've started
Healing up my heart
And promise to me that you will
Complete this task which you did start




Copyright © Kie-Kie ... [ 2005-12-31 06:37:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Finish What You've Started (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 06:54:38 AM AEST
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Very tender, touching, beautifull write.
huggs,
emy`


Re: Finish What You've Started (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 08:50:59 AM AEST
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Nice peice :-)


Re: Finish What You've Started (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 10:57:10 AM AEST
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awwwwww so sweet. I am so glad to hear things have turned so wonderful for you!
You certainly deserve it!!!


Re: Finish What You've Started (User Rating: 1 )
by Sir_Odd87 on Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 11:50:30 AM AEST
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I liked reading it, but who cares how I feel about the poem?? Good for you... the best of luck to the both of you, ideally together.


Re: Finish What You've Started (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 01:07:40 PM AEST
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beautiful, so warm and full of heart songs.
Im so happy for you and I wish you the best

Michelle


Re: Finish What You've Started (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 04:00:58 PM AEST
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aw hunni! Your sweetness shines through in this beautiful write.
So filled with love and devotion. (you DO know I'm a hopeless
romantic, right?) How could I not love this piece? This is simply
MAHvelous hun!

*hugs*
~Breezy


Re: Finish What You've Started (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 12:42:50 PM AEST
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This poem has a gentle loving touch. Very romantic, with a reciprocal love tenderly expressed.

Well done, I really like the title

Will


Re: Finish What You've Started (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 09:47:20 PM AEST
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Kie! Very, very sweet write! This poem reminds one of what love should be....caring, sweet, healing, and forever....very sweet! I hope he deserves it! ; )

C


Re: Finish What You've Started (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 03:51:21 AM AEST
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What a sweet poem, with such a gentle flow and choice of words. Almost makes a grown man cry, if his ducts were not already dry.

I really enjoyed this. It opens my heart and makes me understand a little more about the innocence of passion and love.

Captivating!

- SCM


Re: Finish What You've Started (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 10:54:43 PM AEST
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I like this- no it's not perfect from a poetic point of view but it has depth and emotion that more than makes up for the beat structure. It is this depth that makes this one of your best poems.




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