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Daddy I'm Comming Home
Contributed by
cashncoe
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Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 10:56:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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my daddy's in heavon
calling me home
to the place where
wild angels roam
this prison called earth
is no place for me
I'm destined for greatness
I'm destined to be free
so daddy I'm on my way
I'm comming home at last
the angel of death is comming
and he's moving so fast
so clear a spot for me
at your heavenly table
and lets enjoy our time
while were willing and able
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cashncoe
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2005-12-30 22:56:10]
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Re: Daddy I'm Comming Home
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by Pyrochick on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 12:03:34 AM AEST
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| thats really good. and sad, and im sorry. |
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Re: Daddy I'm Comming Home
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by gigglez08 on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 12:18:15 AM AEST
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| sad poem |
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Re: Daddy I'm Comming Home
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by Breezer08 on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 12:34:54 AM AEST
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well, i do have to say that this is a beautiful write. my father died when i was 2 so i understand how you feel about wanting to be with him. if you look at my poems, youll find one that is called "Daddy, I'm Letting Go" youll understand the title when you read it. good write and keep it up. congrats
~Breeze |
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Re: Daddy I'm Comming Home
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by mrpeanut64 on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 04:01:46 AM AEST
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| very well done. I lost my mother 2 years ago and I miss having some one who I could lean on no matter what the issue. |
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