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Semper in Angraria
Contributed by
kaya-chan
on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 10:18:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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if only I could show you
all the things you never saw
(never saw)
if I could show what it feels
like to be on your own
(on your own)
you never saw the scars
never heard the screams
you were blind to my pain
and now you're seeing in your dreams
that I'm lost beyond your reach
gone beyond your sight and touch
(you were blind)
you will never see me again
I lay here dying
and you never saw
(never saw)
now you know I'm gone
never to return
(my soul)
semper in angraria
Copyright ©
kaya-chan
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2005-12-30 22:18:33] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Semper in Angraria
(User Rating: 1 ) by crow6279 on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 02:48:46 AM AEST (User
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nice write...
some just cannot see...or refuse to |
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Re: Semper in Angraria
(User Rating: 1 ) by TREBOR on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 07:41:09 AM AEST (User
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Strong work
Felt like a song waiting to be sung
Use of brackets worked well |
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