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The rythem of life
Contributed by
brittaney
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Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 10:05:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Life is a rythem,
Just close your eyes to hear,
You wake up every morning,
Grow older every year.
You shower every morning,
Eat three meals everyday,
You watch TV sometimes,
Go to church on Sunday.
You take a walk every friday,
Enjoy life as it comes,
Treat is as a precious gift,
'Cause you only get one.
Copyright ©
brittaney
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2005-12-30 22:05:36]
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Re: The rythem of life
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by emystar on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 10:23:46 PM AEST
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Very wise write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The rythem of life
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by outlaw_mutiny on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 10:31:47 PM AEST
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nice write i enjoyed it and know just what you mean
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Re: The rythem of life
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by jessejames on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 10:51:08 PM AEST
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truly wise nice write
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Re: The rythem of life
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st January 2006 @ 09:36:55 PM AEST
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| Yes you are absolutely correct, was thinking of that movie, GroundHogs Day, and since I saw that movie, I change up my schedule every day, so I am not constantly doing the same thing every day, at the same times. Life is a gift, your poem is precious. Raquel Leah |
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