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goodbye
Contributed by
gizmo2010
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Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 09:20:41 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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I said hello that day not knowing that i wouldnt be able to say goodbye
I heard the news that night and couldn't help but crie
No that must be some mistake
I wanted to fall asleep and see that it was just a dream when i awake
But as i layed there i realized she wasn't coming back
When i knew this my heart felt like it would crack and eventually fall apart
Why did you have to leave me why did you have to go
i didnt get to say goodbye but at least i got a hello
rest in peace jewels c
1992-1999
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Re: goodbye
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by emystar on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 09:27:31 PM AEST
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Sad but great writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: goodbye
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 10:02:05 PM AEST
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| Very sad poem..but really enjoyed it. Remember the hellos. |
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Re: goodbye
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by egg on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 04:56:34 AM AEST
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thats reallly sad and a reallly good wright
good one
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