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LISTEN MY CHILD
Contributed by
Lovingcritters
on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 06:56:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Holiday Poetry
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LISTEN MY CHILD
Mother Earth spoke to me
before the trees wore snow,
Blinded is brother Owl from it's glow.
Are you listening to me, my small papoose?
Four seasons ago, you breathed life 'neath the
Great bare Spruce
I tell you these words so they follow you
Many Many Moons
You will speak of these sayings in the tribunes
For all moons be gentle with your brother
Soft to his heart like the Blue Bird answer
When you see him without food, you give him
yours is that heard?
Mother Earth will supply you many times
over if you hear this word.
And when his heart is crying out,
you sit with him, and listen
The Great Spirit then will see you
for He is hidden.
Always look behind you, and see
if you have left good
You can never walk like a man
if you did bad in your childhood.
Oh Great Spirit help my child to
hear your word
For we are all apart of your plan
Help him to sing like the Meadow Lark
and not be eaten by the buzzard.
Please teach him how to love your
Earth, and all his brothers and Sisters
To give his best bow and arrow and respect
not just to his, but all cultures.
My heart holds Warm Love
for you all my brothers & sisters
And May the Great Spirit
Fill you with love and mercy
four seasons and many moons from this day
And may your hearts n'er be lonely
Created by
LovingCritters
I am adopted Cheyenne
ConSue
"A people without history is like wind on the buffalo grass."
Source: (Native American Sioux)
*Papoose Smiles*
Copyright ©
Lovingcritters
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Re: LISTEN MY CHILD
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by emystar on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 07:16:43 PM AEST
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Very good write, mum.
Same back at cha.
huggs,
yobrat,
emy |
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Re: LISTEN MY CHILD
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 08:20:57 PM AEST
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From one Native American heart to all others. May each New Year bring you love and peace.
MorningDove
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Re: LISTEN MY CHILD
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by brew on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 08:54:43 PM AEST
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Another magnificent write, from such an extradinary lady.
Your writes, always touch me in inspiring, ways. I am as well part Cherokee.........Happy New Years.
Hugs
Brew~ |
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Re: LISTEN MY CHILD
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 11:38:32 AM AEST
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I love your stories, there is always so much more to them than meets the eye.
A wonderful tale!! |
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Re: LISTEN MY CHILD
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 06:23:57 PM AEST
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You write with such beauty and i love your words of knowledge and wisdom that reaches my heart and teaches me in ways you could never imagine. (((((hugs00
A very happy new year to you and your loved ones Sue
Love Angelxx |
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Re: LISTEN MY CHILD
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 02:14:26 PM AEST
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This is a really beautiful poem and really awesome.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: LISTEN MY CHILD
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 04:29:17 PM AEST
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| This poem is beautifully tender notes.. taking care of nature, we all must still do, for what is left.. sad the land was taken away, destroying the beauty of it.. nature, we must take care of it, before it takes care of us.. teaching our children is the right thing... teach them correctly.. just like Jesus taught us those important stories of truth.. this poem has nice lessons, it is a prayer in itself... all of us children should love to hear these wise words... wonderful write consue... RL |
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Re: LISTEN MY CHILD
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 10:02:08 PM AEST
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ConSue,
A little bird told me that I needed to explore your work. I am sorry it took so long.
This is beautifully written. It tells a story of love, hope and faith to me.
You have also made me miss the beauty and simple life of my home there in Wyoming.
*truly misses the Meadow Larks song*
~Shannon |
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Re: LISTEN MY CHILD
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 03:00:45 PM AEST
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| very nice poem. |
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Re: LISTEN MY CHILD
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 10:59:47 PM AEST
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Sweet mom ConSue whatever your subject/topic you always capture its true essence. So much can be learnt from ur remarkable writes. You never ever disappoint ur reader mom ConSue. I am truly blest to have such an amazing and remarkable lady in my life. Here's to you sweet mom ConSue.
love n hugs,
~sue the roo from across the blue~ |
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