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Parent's Approval
Contributed by
Poser
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Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 05:49:47 PM in AEST
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Will your parents
approve
when they find out
how old I am?
Will they still
say it's fine
when they find out
I have done all those
bad things in the past?
Will they trust me when
I say I would never do
anything to hurt you,
no matter what?
Does it help to say that
I am a changed man,
I will do no wrong as long
as it will help me be with you.
Can I redeem myself
by telling the truth?
By saying that I love
you more than life itself?
Copyright ©
Poser
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2005-12-30 17:49:47]
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Re: Parent's Approval
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 01:16:43 PM AEST
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| Hopefully all works out...this is a good poem. I hope the best for you! |
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Re: Parent's Approval
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 11:11:49 PM AEST
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| Many people can relat to this. It is hard to get a parents approval.good job! |
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Re: Parent's Approval
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by Channing on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 06:05:19 PM AEST
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Great write, and something that every man must face one day...
-Channing- |
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