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WASTED WORDS
Contributed by
TREBOR
on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 05:39:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Put two fingers down my throat
To force the vomit out
Flushed but relieved
These words are forced too
From vague memories
Plagarised intellect
An empty soul
Will they scatter my ashes?
Perhaps I am dead already?
I saw life once only
I glanced across
My son's attention fixed
On a trapeeze artist high above
His face was transfigured
I stole his glory
I began to exist but never wrote again
Copyright ©
TREBOR
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2005-12-30 17:39:52]
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Re: WASTED WORDS
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by xxbreathlessx on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 05:59:19 PM AEST
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| well i have to say, that first line def. gabbed my attention. good job on the poem |
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Re: WASTED WORDS
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 09:32:24 PM AEST
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| WOW. I had to read this a few times. What an awesome piece of writing. Peace, Laura |
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Re: WASTED WORDS
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by mrpeanut64 on
Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 03:13:55 AM AEST
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| Why is it that youth is wasted on the young. By the time you appreciate it your too old and jaded to enjoy it. Great poem |
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