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Freedom
Contributed by
mindset
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Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 03:09:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Standing free the water around my ground
A float like so many looking empty with many frown
Realised many in my trips of so much down
Found a place for my inside mistakes
Felt that place of pure create
My soul felt no longer late
Took a trip to the sky blue true
So much learn I hope to recreate
Never before shared the pure air
Always looked out with total despair
But standing at the waters edge
I felt like I was moving free
And I didn't care
All my life I gazed on a face of lone
Wished my heart would end a near
I stand strong now in all my insight
Change a place of only wait
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Re: Freedom
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 03:53:35 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful.. yes, let your soul run free like that river.. stand at the edge.. feel yourself there.. listen to the rushing quietness of pounding waters kicking over stones and place your mind upon that strong stone , then let the sky reach deep down into those waters where your soul can feel the flow of rushing quietness run through you.
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