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THEY CALLED US
Contributed by
eleventoedsloth
on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 10:29:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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This is a travesty,
You call it "tragedy"
I believe in honesty.
I believe we hardly ever had a chance
This is a treason trial,
love is on the line!
Your beauty is a straight edge,
that cuts so deep and fine!
These are cliche words,
but they paint the picture well
& this is "forgive and forget",
some odd euphoric-hell.
Call me when the party's over,
and we'll fall in love again
Copyright ©
eleventoedsloth
... [
2005-12-30 10:29:56]
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Re: THEY CALLED US
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by ElevenToedSloth on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 10:35:18 AM AEST
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| The title is supposed to be THEY CALLED US "LOVE" |
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Re: THEY CALLED US
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by xxbreathlessx on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 05:57:13 PM AEST
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| i love this poem, it says so much. i love the beggining, i love the middle and i really love the end. GREAt job ! |
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Re: THEY CALLED US
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 10:05:05 PM AEST
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| Great job,i wish i could offer something else but the words are eluding me at the moment...but this poem holds a lot the lines that were written. |
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