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The Shadow
Contributed by
Mallard8
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Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 08:05:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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This is he, waiting ever so patiently for the right time
For the moment to steal my love!
I try to warn her, she slips through my ever loving grasp
As I search for her I feel her sorrow.
He has caught you, resist and fight him!
But no, I turn the corner and see you sink into his arms
I can only watch and cry
For the Shadow has stolen my love, my only!
As I walk away I fall many times
My vision blurred with tears of sorrow and grief
I fall to my knees and plead with God
Why! Why have you taken the only thing good from me!
Let her return, or I shall turn my back on you
This is the end, I feel love no more, nothing can be as you were!
As I feel the knife enter my body
I utter one last prayer for you
I love you! My precious, I will be waiting for you,
Come home my love, my baby I am waiting for your safe return!
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2005-12-29 20:05:08]
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Re: The Shadow
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 08:47:29 PM AEST
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very nice poem!!
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Re: The Shadow
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by gizmo2010 on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 09:32:30 PM AEST
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| i like the details its a very good peice |
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Re: The Shadow
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by Moshi_Moshi on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 11:19:14 PM AEST
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| I know what its like to lose someone you love to another person. Great poem! It had really goood detail. |
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Re: The Shadow
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by hisprettygirl on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 04:05:09 PM AEST
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your basically amazing at writing and im so jealous...teach me please...and dont say you arent either...when did you write this one...and who is it about? :)
-heidi |
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