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Forget Me
Contributed by
brokenheartsbleed
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Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 11:34:53 AM in AEST
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How can you tell if I’m smiling because I don’t even know anymore
The difference of happiness and sadness have lost all meaning to me
But I’ve gotten used to this so don’t feel bad
This is not what I choose I wish things could get better
I’ve tried so hard to be something I’m not and it only makes things worse
You don’t make this any easier on me and I don’t know why
They were wrong when they said boys don’t cry
My heart beats but only once a minute so I’m barely alive
I barely exist but I’m holding on I’m trying to make this work
It all seems so peaceful when its dark and everyone is asleep
The world seems to die at night except for me
I’ve been dying all along
Because broken hearts still bleed
If I should fall into oblivion before the night ends
Try and remember the times that we had
Those late nights just staring at the stars talking
The first time our eyes met and the first time we kissed
You may forget me but don’t forget these memories
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2005-12-29 11:34:53]
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Re: Forget Me
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 11:39:38 AM AEST
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a sad honest write
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Re: Forget Me
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 01:25:31 PM AEST
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Geez...this is really sad. Spoken from the heart, and painfully honest. I hope things get better for you soon. I wouldn't try to be something you're not, just be who you are, only happy : )
Scorp.
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Re: Forget Me
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 02:01:33 PM AEST
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| Completely honest. I think we all go through this kind of situation. Take things a day at a time and live for the moment. |
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Re: Forget Me
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by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 02:23:11 PM AEST
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so sad, i agree. but yet its beautiful. its almost like a letter and there were many lines in there i thought were great, for example:
"I’ve been dying all along
Because broken hearts still bleed"
"They were wrong when they said boys don’t cry"
thee kind of stuck out to me. you did a great job.
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Re: Forget Me
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by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 02:23:11 PM AEST
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so sad, i agree. but yet its beautiful. its almost like a letter and there were many lines in there i thought were great, for example:
"I’ve been dying all along
Because broken hearts still bleed"
"They were wrong when they said boys don’t cry"
thee kind of stuck out to me. you did a great job.
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Re: Forget Me
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 09:16:42 PM AEST
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| this was a good poem but sad |
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Re: Forget Me
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by LostAmbition on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 12:42:16 AM AEST
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Woah! Sad!
Those last 7 lines
kill me
Good poem
feel better soon |
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