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Puppy Love
Contributed by
spike
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Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 03:13:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
PetPoems
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Loyalty, unconditional
Floor to lounge, positional
Silent calling cards - abysmal
Carpet wet spots, submissional
(Get a dog)
Bizarre antics, hilarious
Ransacked garbage, notorious
Midnight howling - cacophonous
Prince of Dogtown, eponymous
(Help the paw)
Imaginary burglars, guard doggery
Bullying the cat, clear thuggery
Stolen slippers - that’s robbery!
Puppy dog eyes, much huggery
(Count to canine)
Park visits, for poopery
Pricked ears, curiosity
Smelling everything - such snoopery!
Chasing the tail, more puffery
( Puppy love )
End of day, reclining
Scraps and milk, fine dining
Time to sleep - some whining
Pastel dreams, till morning
(Get a dog).
Copyright ©
spike
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2005-12-29 03:13:20]
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Re: Puppy Love
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by brew on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 10:04:39 AM AEST
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Simple, and cute.
Loved the pic.
Dogs.......they are the best friend.
Put a smile on my face.
Thanks for posting
Brew~ |
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Re: Puppy Love
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by Shmokin on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 11:12:10 AM AEST
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Lovely piece, made me grin, nice format, (got a dog, love him dearly)
:-) |
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Re: Puppy Love
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 12:51:32 PM AEST
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Haha! I love this!!! This gave me a smile big time. I love animals, especially dogs, and you captured all their dog foolery in this write! Great style you wrote it with too, and of course I love the pic: )
Scorp.
(Who has a dog, and is hopefully adopting a second one very, very soon) |
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Re: Puppy Love
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by DreamPoetess on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 07:08:03 PM AEST
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| I liked this poem, got a lot of laughs out of me. fun write |
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Re: Puppy Love
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 11:51:55 PM AEST
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Holy poopery! What a (doggie) treat!!!! This is so creative and so perfectly delivered ---- I am both silly and impressed at I sit here!
Oh, Spike - how I hope YPDC never loses you! I always, always enjoy my trips to your page!
Going back for another read,
~Snemmy
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Re: Puppy Love
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 12:29:19 PM AEST
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You have caught the acts of "doghood" so to speak, perfectly!!!
What a clever, humpourous and well written write!!!
Thanks for this bright spot in a rather dreary day!!! |
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Re: Puppy Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 05:04:37 AM AEST
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| Yes,that's dogs alright.Like the way you done this Spike,smiling here. |
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Re: Puppy Love
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 13th January 2006 @ 11:19:33 PM AEST
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You are a very remarkable and creavtive writer Spike. It's most enjoyable and most pleasant to read such brilliantly penned masterpieces by you. Whatever you write about u always capture the subject so well.
I loved this poem it was cute, witty and the pic tops it off. Dogs are intelligent and they make awesome pets. Well done and thanks so much for a most enjoyable read.
*warm hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Puppy Love
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 11:06:09 AM AEST
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| Yup! Spike's definitely had a dog or two. You describe 'em succintly, if one doesn't have to look up too many of your mind expanding words. Dang your good! |
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