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open your eyes
Contributed by
carolinehope
on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 12:21:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Fragile (so fragile) in my heart.
I’m stronger than you thought I was,
But I don’t know where to start.
I’m different after everything…
It's amazing how much
I always took of this abuse.
You were tempting, I admit.
And you always made me weak.
So full of doubt, so out of touch.
I was always so naive.
But reality has chosen me
to guide the wings -
Of my imperfection.
I'm swimming in a sea of emotion.
And there's no way to show you that I'm-
So frozen (so frozen) in time.
I'm lost within the memories.
Of the you I thought I knew.
I've lost my trust in humanity.
I feel so empty, so used.
It was such a grand facade
I played your game along with you.
You were nothing but a mask.
A great pretender, but I was...
So full of love, of everything.
I couldn't change for you.
I was always so unheard...
So unseen...
I'm swimming in a sea of emotion.
And there's no way to show you that I'm-
Fighting (I'm fighting) deep inside.
I'm torn between the warmth of light
And darkness that creeps in
Loving you used to feel so right.
Why do I care when you don't?
I'm struggling to breathe
You're drowning me.
I'm suffocating in your memory.
And I owe it all to you...
I owe it all to me.
Because reality has chosen me
to guide the wings -
Of my imperfection.
Why so incomplete?
Why so indiscrete?
Why was I so naive?
I'm swimming in a sea of emotion.
And there's just no way to show you.
Because you refuse to really open your eyes.
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carolinehope
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2005-12-29 00:21:13]
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Re: open your eyes
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by Shmokin on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 11:21:25 AM AEST
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| lovely piece, could make a good song, thanx for sharing :-) |
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Re: open your eyes
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by brokenheartsbleed on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 11:39:14 AM AEST
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| wow great piece. it captures alot of emotion. things i can relate too. |
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