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THE THREAT OF ''I LOVE YOU''
Contributed by
Poetic_Influence
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Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 09:24:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Stranded in the rain
Feeling such pain
With nothing to gain
I'm going insane
I was just another fool added to your chain
And on my heart there is a stain
It is far to hard to explain
You left me without a reason
My soul has weakened
I guess you have succeeded
In leavingme misleaded
This love..I dont need it
So why do I believe it
And proceed to keep it
These tears I have weeped for it
But I would never speak of it
For I am ashamed
That I was fooled by your flame
By the sweetness when you said my name
Now look what I've became
Just a girl was fell for a game
For a love untamed
I guess I'm to blame
I believed in forever
When they said you were no good I just said "Whatever"
I guess I wasnt very clever
I truly should have known better
Should have been ready for the bad weather
Instead of being lifted off my feet as if I were a feather
But instead I stand here cold and wet
Crying for love that I will never get
Its just something I'm made to regret
And next time I'll be prepared for upset
And not be blinded by silhouette
Now I'll take "I love you" as a threat
And its too bad..
Because my love you will never forget
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Re: THE THREAT OF ''I LOVE YOU''
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 10:56:38 PM AEST
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| awwwwwwwwww this is so sad,, nice poem^_^. |
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Re: THE THREAT OF ''I LOVE YOU''
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 01:01:03 AM AEST
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this was an eye-opening write laced with
tragedy and a freshly broken heart. I have
been hurt many times so I can relate to this
just know that your pain will heal and that one
day you will be ready to love again. Once
again a good poem even though the rhyming
seemed a bit forced at times.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: THE THREAT OF ''I LOVE YOU''
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 01:18:14 AM AEST
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I really really like this poem. I think so many of us can relate to it and especially this line "Now I'll take "I love you" as a threat". I realy like the way you put that into a perspective so many of us can relate to....the threat!
These are like lyrics to a song...seemed to have a rhythm going on there.
I hope the next time you get an "I love you" that the actions speak much louder than just the mere words so the threat is removed. :-)
Take care and thank you for sharing.
Tim
:-)
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