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Breaking Point
Contributed by
LittleMissWonderful
on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 03:39:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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So then something snapped inside of me;
suddenly...
I'm hanging only by a thread.
Thread of you, thread of me.
The wounds beneath are fresh and bloody.
I'm all alone, you've abandoned what there was left to kill in me.
Here I dangle.
Stifling the helpless tears.
This empty chasm beneath, so peaceful.
Dangling, I kick and scream
Don't let me go too far over the edge.
Don't let me slip into oblivion.
The thread snaps. Temptation.
The break down is so bitter sweet;
it gorges itself on my misery.
Empty monstrosity growing inside my wretched body...
break down, break free.
Tear the hurt away from my pale skin; make me raw again.
Leave no room for tears and shame;
take your place.
Pulsing, pulsing, pulsing...
Thrive iside these cold, blue veins.
Oh Lord, oh God, I can't stand the pain.
Let me plummet down
beneath icey waves.
Empty darkness...
I don't have sanity for loss.
Don't... Don't make a sound.
Take me away where nothiness fills my mind.
Copyright ©
LittleMissWonderful
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2005-12-28 15:39:52]
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Re: Breaking Point
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by crow6279 on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 03:47:31 PM AEST
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| nice write. your pain shines through and takes us into that world with you. i know how you feel. |
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Re: Breaking Point
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by Poetic_Influence on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 03:51:11 PM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: Breaking Point
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by Shmokin on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 03:55:07 PM AEST
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| good write, v emotional :-) |
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Re: Breaking Point
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 04:18:04 PM AEST
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isnt writing the best way to bring out bad feelings i hope you feel better
r.m.wilder
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Re: Breaking Point
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 04:46:20 PM AEST
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This is really deep and awesome, I hope you feel better.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: Breaking Point
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by LittleMissWonderful on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 05:03:17 PM AEST
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| Thanks, I do after writing that. |
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