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For A Moment
Contributed by
NoSaint
on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 02:59:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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For a moment
Let your heart touch mine
Together in motion
Suspending time
For a moment
Spirits free
Dancing on winds
Rainbows to see
For a moment
Let the magic flow
And watch
The afterglow
For a moment
Walk my path
And ever changed
Will be the aftermath
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2005-12-28 14:59:03] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: For A Moment
(User Rating: 1 ) by CucuaVanda on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 03:35:22 PM AEST (User
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This is a beautiful write I love the imagry it gave me! Keep up the good work!
~Dove's Promise~ |
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Re: For A Moment
(User Rating: 1 ) by crow6279 on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 03:49:12 PM AEST (User
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nice write ns. full of hope and optimism...and the endless search for both |
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Re: For A Moment
(User Rating: 1 ) by kidnic on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 04:07:19 PM AEST (User
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Great write... I like the metaphors used... nice. |
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Re: For A Moment
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 07:20:10 PM AEST (User
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very lovely,
sounds like a night of romance at your house
*sly grins*
huggers
Michelle |
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Re: For A Moment
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 11:16:22 PM AEST (User
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Dear Shari, I used to love your "Waterfalls" and all the wonderful imagery. The imagination runs away! However, you have done it one better with this poem. I think Shelby said it best, or else she and I have the same minds? *smiles*
Pretty Sneaky there, Pretty Sneaky
Warm love
consuegranny too |
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