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Loneliness is greater pain within itself.
Contributed by
Shattered_soul
on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 11:06:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Have you ever felt so alone
youd think you lost your mind?
Or so depressed
Tears burn from your eyes?
The pains inside will always stay
But the one thing that seemed to help
Is something done,
Where a greater pain is dealt.
Tormenting you
Even now that you gave it up
to someone that you love
they torment you.
Even as you go to find one
the pain inside taunts you crazy
Twists your thoughts into madness
dont ever trust yourself alone.
You that you wouldnt.
Promised you would talk
you promised that you quit
even within your deepest pains,
You promised that youd quit.
Copyright ©
Shattered_soul
... [
2005-12-28 11:06:00]
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Re: Loneliness is greater pain within itself.
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by Kamal on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 11:38:38 AM AEST
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Totally understood...
Felt that and still go through it .....I thought I was the one crazy but i was just going through what your poem spoke on....
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peace & love keep up the inspiration |
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Re: Loneliness is greater pain within itself.
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 05:29:21 PM AEST
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yea its a part of life neat write
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Re: Loneliness is greater pain within itself.
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 10:27:15 PM AEST
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Yeah thats life... nice poem.
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