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Blood lust
Contributed by
HatchetGirl
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Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 03:38:18 AM in AEST
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DarkPoetry
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The smell of blood fills the air
your hand passes along my face
brushing the hair on my cheek away
softly telling me I'm perfectly evil
you let me taste your evil
and now you shall taste mine
every bite provokes you more
I know I saw hell in your eyes
blood rolling off of my lips
falls upon your naked body
smearing circles with my fingernails
relaxed after all the screaming
you tell me I'm absolutly beautiful
your soft lips touch mine and I melt
the taste of blood still holding on
passion takes over and we're one again
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2005-12-28 03:38:18]
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Re: Blood lust
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 10:01:30 AM AEST
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Well now, not exactly my idea of fun, but as for the write, you have expressed your ideas extremely well.
Keep up the good work! |
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Re: Blood lust
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 01:07:30 AM AEST
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| i agree with phil. sangre mia es sangre tuya eh? well quite the disturbing little write, but thank goodness its not the typical reminder or vampirelike poems. |
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Re: Blood lust
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by deathbringer on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 03:30:23 AM AEST
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| the desire of doing evil , the lust , they beutifully coexist in this writing |
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