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Take It Slow.
Contributed by
dragonfly
on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 03:06:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Bursting flames
Over the horizon.
We lay on the sand,
Warm breeze floats
Across the land.
Salty water licks
Lazily at my calves.
I stare at my other half.
The fiery sunlight
Glinting in your eyes.
A smile on your face,
A kiss on the lips.
How could I have known
It would be like this?
Salty skin, rusty hearts.
We're new to this,
But it's a start.
Basking in the early light,
Exploring every night.
With your hands
Buried in my hair.
Your face buried in my neck.
I take in your scent
And soak up your caress.
Let's take it slow.
No reason to rush.
I want this to be right.
I've got a feeling about us.
Copyright ©
dragonfly
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2005-12-28 03:06:52]
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Re: Take It Slow.
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by Shmokin on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 08:03:20 AM AEST
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| Nice peice :-) |
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Re: Take It Slow.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 10:03:18 AM AEST
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Interesting format here, but it definately works. You have great visuals here and the sentiment comes across very well,
Nice write!! |
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Re: Take It Slow.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 02:23:25 PM AEST
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| great write I really enjoyed it. I really liked the ending its very sweet. |
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