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Half Open & Half Closed
Contributed by
Recyclebin
on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 12:09:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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A mother sighs....
her child takes a pose.
The chair sways......
the angel's eyes begin to close.
Eyes Half opened...
Innocence looks up once more.
The Mother smiles...
her labor no more a chore.
Heaven sent...
God has delivered a gift
Eyes half closed...
an sleep comes swift
Mother and child...
now are both dozed.
A picture of heaven...
Half opened...and Half closed.
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Recyclebin
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2005-12-28 00:09:24]
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Re: Half Open & Half Closed
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 12:20:20 AM AEST
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very nice poem i liked it...............^_^
welcome to your poetry Dot Com. |
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Re: Half Open & Half Closed
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 12:25:23 AM AEST
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Beautifull write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Half Open & Half Closed
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by Shmokin on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 08:04:34 AM AEST
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| nice peice :-) |
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Re: Half Open & Half Closed
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 10:10:09 AM AEST
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Very, very sweet!!!!
Perhaps take out the "as the" in the 4th line to improve the flow. |
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Re: Half Open & Half Closed
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by CucuaVanda on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 12:32:27 PM AEST
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Very nice, it warmed the heart :)
~Dove's Promise~ |
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Re: Half Open & Half Closed
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by ButchHoward on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 01:28:29 PM AEST
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| Very nicely done! It evokes strong emotions for the reader. |
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Re: Half Open & Half Closed
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by shutterfly2004 on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 10:47:56 PM AEST
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| this was a very good poem |
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Re: Half Open & Half Closed
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 09:45:48 PM AEST
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OMG!! This is absolutely beautiful!! This brought a sense of peace to me.. Thank you for this.. I'll explain why in a pm later...
Jenni |
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