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Defeat
Contributed by
Moshi_Moshi
on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 11:20:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Write a letter to your friends and family
Saying sorry but your just not happy
Because your lost in destruction and defeat
Your just so tired of always being beat
Lost the battle lost the war
Sometimes it just feels like your daily chore
Defeat is in your eyes
By now its not a surprise
Tired of losing what you held so dear
Losing everything even your worst fears
Your so tired of everything
Just to get away you would do anything
So you write this letter
How your life could be better
How if you could just die
And stop living this lie
Never again you would be in defeat
This time you weren't the one who got beat
Copyright ©
Moshi_Moshi
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2005-12-27 23:20:53]
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Re: Defeat
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by karmen on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 01:29:38 AM AEST
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| i really like it .. totally get how u feel about this one.. when i write i just write and dont even think i just let my feelings do it all.. and it seems like thats what u did on this.. its a great write... thanks for sharing! |
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Re: Defeat
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by Shmokin on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 08:08:11 AM AEST
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| good write, really no need for explanation at begining, poem speaks for itself :-) |
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Re: Defeat
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 05:24:07 AM AEST
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| An interesting write. I liked it. It held a lot of emotion. Great work! :-) |
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