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Sand
Contributed by
pecjak
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Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 09:49:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Sand
sand of time
an immense desert
cold
with silence
slipping away
eternally.
In tiny fractions
of infinity
we drown
slowly
in the mist
of shiny
crystal particles
sending
multicolored
beams
into the void
of time
sand of time
sand.
Copyright ©
pecjak
... [
2005-12-27 21:49:23]
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Re: Sand
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by outlaw_mutiny on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 10:16:47 PM AEST
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good write
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Re: Sand
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 05:10:10 PM AEST
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a very simple but good write
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Re: Sand
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 07:20:27 PM AEST
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| The imagery in this poem was awesome. I really enjoyed this poem! |
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Re: Sand
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by Channing on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 04:50:56 PM AEST
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Short and sweet, I like this poem a lot! Great job!
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