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INCOGKNEETOE ?????????
Contributed by
emystar
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Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 09:20:13 PM in AEST
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U shoot from yo hip
fantasize, make up lies
Yo brain genious, cogkneetoe
heah, ova there, ya know?
Incogkneetoe, you're always here.
Workin wit yo brain
No 2 names the same.
Incogkneetoe, here, there,
eva where.
Me am, jus who me am.
Ain't no time 4 flim flam
Now if ya wonna always play
Ya neva knoe if my pens
talkin or if it's
my head, friend?
Keep in mind , may be
channaling, Greek.
It's a great universe, see?
Maybe u can read me,
we'll see.
But rest assured no
bull ****, from me.
I test 2, ya neva knoe
SultryRose's Signatures
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emystar
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Re: INCOGKNEETOE ?????????
(User Rating: 1 ) by Poetic_Influence on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 09:57:07 PM AEST (User
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umm,yea |
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Re: INCOGKNEETOE ?????????
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sassybat on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 10:40:06 PM AEST (User
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Think my cogs are broken in my knees and toes. This is a great write, Emy.
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Re: INCOGKNEETOE ?????????
(User Rating: 1 ) by Shmokin on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 07:57:17 AM AEST (User
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Oi fink dat wus a pwitty cleva bita wriotin
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Re: INCOGKNEETOE ?????????
(User Rating: 1 ) by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 10:56:29 AM AEST (User
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Great poem Emystar.
Ludos and "Thujmbs up" for your insight!
"Thumbs "Down" for the Incognito fellow.
The Romans knew that full well and the Greeks too.
Who wants to be
"Incognito" anyway?
You got it so right.
KUDOS!
Elizabeth
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Re: INCOGKNEETOE ?????????
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 02:37:33 PM AEST (User
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You're right!
"Ya neva knoe if my pens
talkin or if it's
my head, friend?"
Enjoyed it nonetheless.
Very different and very clever!
Thanks for Sharon.....uh, I mean sharin'!
Tim
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Re: INCOGKNEETOE ?????????
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 07:19:20 PM AEST (User
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Woo hoo Emy, you tell 'em!!! I can very easily hear this as a song, and I love the style here. Well done! I enjoyed this piece alot.
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Re: INCOGKNEETOE ?????????
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 11:12:33 PM AEST (User
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I just loved these words-->
"Ya neva knoe if my pens
talkin or if it's
my head, friend?"
Keep at it, grrlfriend...
Jenni
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Re: INCOGKNEETOE ?????????
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 06:45:22 PM AEST (User
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Emy, I have always felt your pure loving heart from the very first words spoken to me on the very first day I met you in comment and in a poem. I love you, never change , I know you use more than 40% of your brain, not many do. Pen or head, your heart is 100% A OK
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Re: INCOGKNEETOE ?????????
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 07:02:29 PM AEST (User
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Little Emy this was so different, hope you fill me in later.........how very clever you be my little Emy.
Love the Incogkneetoe?????????/that you are not my dear child,
Wonderful write
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Re: INCOGKNEETOE ?????????
(User Rating: 1 ) by SocialMisfit on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 03:28:37 AM AEST (User
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you so need to record this as a song and let me hear it lol!! this was cool.
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Re: INCOGKNEETOE ?????????
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spazzo on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 02:15:24 PM AEST (User
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This is a really awesome poem.
Take care.
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Re: INCOGKNEETOE ?????????
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 11:35:47 AM AEST (User
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You have my vote on this, emystar. |
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