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No smile to grace me
Contributed by
crow6279
on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 01:13:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Her gaze cuts through me...never seeing
the smile I grasp for meant for another
She approaches to ask something meaningless
her words I pretend are meant for me
Overlooked and overshadowed
the toll of life clearly evident in my eyes
My face has none of its youthful wonder
the failures reflect in the mirror
The past cannot be held close...for it lies
the future no longer a given
Misunderstanding the wrongs I have offered
turning away from the gifts I now bear
I cannot live my life in her happiness
it doesn't include me...though I still hope
Hugs that were once warm are now just cordial
fingers no longer laced together...forever
The phone still rings but not for me
letters not written and never mailed
This isn't how I envisioned what's come to be
pierce my shell and find nothingness
Looking for solace in realms of solitude
pulling deeper within myself...falling
Would I recognize coming redemption
or is my soul too corrupt for simple love again
Catching her eye I bade her welcome
come look at me and the person I am
But she glances away and looks for another
her smile never to grace me again
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crow6279
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2005-12-27 13:13:12]
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Re: No smile to grace me
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 01:16:00 PM AEST
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sad left me feeling lonely and empty
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Re: No smile to grace me
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 01:58:21 PM AEST
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so sad left me so sad and empty inside ,,
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Re: No smile to grace me
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 04:38:01 PM AEST
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touched me with this one I felt your soul
hugs
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Re: No smile to grace me
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 06:51:19 PM AEST
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Sadly emotive, but written full of detail, and easily relatable to the average reader. Nicely done.
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Re: No smile to grace me
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by emystar on
Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 03:22:45 AM AEST
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aww so sad but again, awesomly written.
huggs,
emy |
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