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Daydream
Contributed by
expressions-of-a-girl
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Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 11:56:07 AM in AEST
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A day passes by without a trace of soul,
as she stares out of the misted glass with
troubles bottled up inside her.
So many bottles she could at least count
over ten.
what could happen if she told her heart to set free?
and let go the fears and twisted problems inside of her?
what would happen if the soul of hers,
switched with a daydream.
wouldn't it be a different story...
altogether?
Maybe a daydream in itself is a trouble, worry or a doubt?
bigger than the competition inside.
Maybe the sheer thought of life and meaningless nothingness is
enough to be a problem itself?
or maybe its just one of the many bottles.
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2005-12-27 11:56:07]
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Re: Daydream
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 01:46:23 PM AEST
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| welcome to ypdc and also nice poem .. i liked it:) |
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Re: Daydream
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by Terry_Stephen_Driscoll on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 06:44:23 PM AEST
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A bad poem? ....I think not ...I loved it ...such a natural write.
I like it when you can here the thoughts of the poet.
Excellent I say ...one of the nicest pieces I have read on here for ages (OK so it needs a little work... but who cares ...loved it)
There is plenty of crap on this site as I am sure you will find out ...but everyone is entitled to post their work for comment ...I have a strange feeling I just might enjoy what is to come from you in the future ...good luck and welcome. |
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Re: Daydream
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 07:49:32 PM AEST
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| who said this was a bad poem?! I thought it was awesome! I guess you are like me and in need in some serious self confidence! But this was great. honestly! |
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