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the feelings of inside don't match the mask
Contributed by
needs_change
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Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 10:17:29 PM in AEST
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she thinks of him
and starts to cry
quickly now
hide your eyes
if they don't see the tears
they will never know
if you don't let them in
you never have to let them go
smile every second
of every single day
let them all think
that you are okay
when the door is closed
be sure to lock it tight
go ahead cry yourself
to sleep tonight
when you wake up
wash all the tears off
when u go to eat breakfast
all u have to do is goof off
they will never
ever know
as long as you
don't let it show
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Re: the feelings of inside don't match the mask
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 12:03:12 AM AEST
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I hear ya.
Good wrting.
huggs,
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Re: the feelings of inside don't match the mask
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by EverlastingDawn on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 08:06:08 PM AEST
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Interesting choice, to have the poem be sort of like instructions. A sad but oddly comforting poem. I really like your poetry. Good Write.
~Dawn |
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