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Halls of Hell
Contributed by
MissUnderstood
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Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 07:00:34 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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I have seen what you have not,
I am what makes your soul rot.
I am the truth never to be told,
I am the lies that you all hold.
I am the wind that blows violently through your hair.
I am the absolute darkness that surrounds everywhere.
I can take you away with just one breath,
Or I can bring you a slow painful death.
I am the place where mankind fell,
Casting you down into the halls of hell.
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MissUnderstood
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2005-12-26 19:00:34]
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Re: Halls of Hell
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 01:05:56 AM AEST
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this is very mad indeed, but of course I
guess there is nothing wrong with being mad
especially if it brings out poems like these.
For some reason the first line sticks out the
most. Keep up the writing.
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Re: Halls of Hell
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 07:39:11 PM AEST
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I like this: )
It's good to vent every now and then, and I like your use of emotions, and creative imagery here. It's short, but I'm sure you got your point across to him/her just fine. Nice title btw.
Scorp. |
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