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Destroyed
Contributed by
Darkscorpio
on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 01:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Alone you sit, in your room, the dreams of long ago have come and gone
Tears in your eyes, your mistakes realized, your pain goes on and on
Wonder out loud, if your pain will go away
Will your heart let you see, another love filled day
For it is now scarred, your pain makes you blind
and what's worse than that, more scarred is your mind
The mistakes you made, will haunt you for years
The friendship you lost, could have spared you tears
The older you get, the harder pain will fall
Like rain on a life, where you think you stand tall
"The more pain, the more wiser, when your innocence ends"
I said long ago, when we were close friends
I also told you, I'd strike without warning
You laughed at that statement, and now you're in mourning
I don't care, if you're hurt cause of me
I did what I did, so maybe you'd see
never take for granted, friends that care
When you use them and hurt them, they won't be there
As you sit there in tears, hurt, lonely, and annoyed,
I now claim total victory
for you're mentally destroyed...
Copyright ©
Darkscorpio
... [
2003-01-25 13:15:00]
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Re: Destroyed
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by Carmen on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 02:58:19 PM AEST
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| That's pretty deep, Obviously someone did u wrong. I feel bad 4 who ever it was, but I'm glad u found a way to feel okay about it. |
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Re: Destroyed
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by RealCrystal on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 10:50:13 PM AEST
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| This is a very deep and heartfelt poem, I really liked it. |
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Re: Destroyed
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by midian on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 02:19:45 PM AEST
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| another great poem...... it feels so deep |
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