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Retribution's chill

Contributed by Darkscorpio on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 01:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Take this bitter pill, and swallow
Take this drug, you'll feel more hollow
10 more years, a waste of time
10 more minutes, you'll pay for this crime
...that was done to me

And justice for all? or justice for me?
watch your tears fall silently...
...and slowly walk away

You watch me come forward...
I pull the trigger
You die, I laugh....
I become you
become much sicker

Taste my ruin, I reach in your mind, and pull out your soul
Gleam in my eyes, as yours become dull
Your life is fading, and I am laughing
Sickness possesses me, I want you to fell and taste my pain...
Power and rage, at my command
Darkness pulled from my nightmares that maimed
Hatred summoned from within...
Screaming with vengeance, as I plunge my knife in...
Stabbing your mind, making you feel what I've become
Forever scarred, feelings are numbed
Maddening voice, directing to kill
Welcoming back,
Retribution's chill

Nothing to lose, to destroy is what I choose
Blackness and rage is what I feel
You see the gleam, of the emotional steel
That rapes and stabs inside your soul
I've finally snapped, I've lost control

Payback....a minute of pleasure, from a lifetime of pain
Now you too can be blessed, with "the memories that remain"
Stabbing inside, and plunging back in
Darkness engulfs you, you feel that you've sinned
Humiliation, low self esteem,
My knife goes in deeper, ripped apart at the seems
Crying, and screaming, please stop this
But I'm laughing even harder, the feeling's pure bliss
I'm stabbing
And killing
and raping
destroying
removing your mind
your will to resist is fading
so is your life....
Pure hatred is so blind..............

.....I awaken from the dream
my god, what have I done?

Copyright © Darkscorpio ... [ 2003-01-25 13:15:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Retribution's chill (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 11:58:28 AM AEST
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Got the chills reading this one, SOOOO intense! I think it was the last line that really grabbed me.
Excellent display of emotion, very well written!
~Tanna

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