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Bloody Dreams
Contributed by
Misunderstood_gurl
on
Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 12:07:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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These bloody dreams
Are all I see
When there’s nothing left
But you and me
I love the way
My hands cup around your throat just right
You know this all too well
So you barely give up without a fight
You look into my eyes
As I squeeze your throat so tight
You try to tell me that I’m crazy
And that this just isn’t right
But how can it wrong
When these bloody dreams are all I see
And when they’re practically screaming
To get you back for hurting me
I can’t just ignore
This dream, which is so strong
I have to follow this dream all the way through
Even if I know in my heart, that it is wrong
‘Cause these bloody dreams
Are all I see
When there’s nothing left
But you and me
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Misunderstood_gurl
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2005-12-24 00:07:40]
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Re: Bloody Dreams
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by trini on
Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 01:25:06 AM AEST
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a very powerful write. i enjoyed it
keep up the good work
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Re: Bloody Dreams
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by Jen54 on
Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 05:14:33 PM AEST
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| good write keep it up |
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Re: Bloody Dreams
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 01:19:11 PM AEST
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oh, wow. very strong write here! i extremely loved this right. very powerful and very dark. very visual, i don't know if that is good or not. but i could see all of this happening, very well written. great job! i enjoyed it! keep up the good work.
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Re: Bloody Dreams
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 04:04:27 PM AEST
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I hope this feeling stayed a dream
Or in jail you end it would seem
Beware the feeling within your heart
This the feeling that holds you apart
Interesting perspective you have! Must try it one day?
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