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Black Rose
Contributed by
crystalghost
on
Friday, 23rd December 2005 @ 08:20:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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You close your eyes,
and you remember..
like a wave of cascading waters,
The memories come back,
To the autum in December.
When the leaves still brown,
the wind a chill, but the snow still fell..
and the river froze,
Like cold on ice, it burned you mind like a flame,
Like a secret you will never tell.
You rember his eyes,
like a glowing galaxy,
icy blue-gray,
As wax on a candle, they made your soul melt,
And you wouldn't have it any other way.
You remember his hug,
sending shivers down your spine..
a kiss that stopped time,
Always loving you, like an everlasting song,
That swept you away every time.
Love like a rose,
ice crystals all around..
until that unfaithful day,
When the rose turned black,
And your world feel down.
A grave stone tells it all,
his name engraved on the stone..
and a the rose turns back to red,
As your come out and say,
Our love is deep, it goes straight to the bone.
Copyright ©
crystalghost
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2005-12-23 20:20:39]
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Re: Black Rose
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by Xnoybis on
Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 03:08:37 AM AEST
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| I like the sentiment and the altering rhyme scheme. Sort of following a pattern, but not quite. If I were you, I probably would have wrote this too. haha |
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Re: Black Rose
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by Lilbabe on
Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 04:52:40 PM AEST
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| sad...i like it, really good words. |
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