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Dreaming Sea
Contributed by
ruby_dreamer
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Friday, 23rd December 2005 @ 11:59:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
political
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Strip me clean of my man-made lies,
Strike blind the world of shameful eyes,
Let them look on and see what's me;
A soul of "real" diving into dreaming sea...
Some may cast their eyes away in discontent,
Or some may look on in lustful intent;
Some may be embarrassed, angered or shocked,
I may be praised, honored or mocked...
But dreamers in dreaming sea do dream
And cast what's real for masks and schemes
An identity dubbed fine for society's sake
This is the bravest dive I think I'll take...
Strip me clean of my man-made lies,
Strike blind the world of shameful eyes,
Let them look on and see what's me;
A soul of "real" diving into dreaming sea...
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2005-12-23 11:59:57]
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Re: Dreaming Sea
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by Xnoybis on
Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 03:13:59 AM AEST
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Re: Dreaming Sea
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 5th January 2006 @ 10:20:00 PM AEST
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So we are all exposed at one time or another, but the one person you should always be in level with it yourself.
What a nice concept, and to think you wrote this in about 5 minutes. Takes me all day just get inspired................*smiles*
Just loved if Emmy,
Warm love
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