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Footprints in the Snow
Contributed by
miss_jules
on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 09:50:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I walk this street the last time
Turn this key the last time
Climb these stairs the last time.
These last months have been
like leaving footprints in the snow...
They fade as you look back at them
But what an adventure you had making them
And even though it's temporary
You feel like you've left your mark
If just for a little while...
Copyright ©
miss_jules
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2005-12-22 21:50:59]
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Re: Footprints in the Snow
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by outlaw_mutiny on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 09:58:01 PM AEST
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good write
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Re: Footprints in the Snow
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by Spike on
Friday, 23rd December 2005 @ 07:45:47 AM AEST
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Enchanting and intriguing, with resonance for every reader. Nice structure and expression.
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