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love story for me
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 08:51:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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you lie your words dissolve before my eyes
your weak in your manner it makes me cry
blind in vision you seek but cant find
stress in the matter you cant seem to unwind
inward knowlage not at your grasp
you futures bleak your time has well past
you swim with the sharks but a guppy you are
with the morals you show your image wont go far
a picture of perfect you do not show
with vision of beauty minds gone to slow
blanket of trust nothing but a rag
you skin has fallen your demon has saged
state you love but you follow behind
traped in a world that easly finds
materlistic and greedy in sense
building your home with a twenty foot fence
i said i loved you but i must have lied
loving someone like you i just cannot try
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2005-12-22 20:51:22]
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Re: love story for me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 09:48:25 PM AEST
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Oh yes, we can lie to ourselves, others, but we can never lie to the one who truly knows us.
Great write, enjoyed it a lot Raquel Leah |
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Re: love story for me
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by emystar on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 11:09:58 PM AEST
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Mercy, sounds serious.
Good writing as always.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: love story for me
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by Candice on
Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 01:02:18 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this poem not only for your skilled writing and flexable attitude but for an insight into someone I know.
Thank you
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