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wingless man walks
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 06:46:08 PM in AEST
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wingless man walks the land trying to change his grasp
making way night into day he feels his time wont last
so he builds a tower a monument of his power to show other he was here
but the others came with ideas the same eracting out of fear
now today the buildings lay like tombstones in the sky
while in decay society lay viewing the marvels so high
one man walked the concrete he thought was blocking the little sky view
so he went his own he thought from this day everything will become new
but as he walked with no one to talk he thought he was time was done
in his way he thought he would display a little of what he had one
he built a pillar with with words and pictures displaying the problems with man
with out display more people walked his way all with the same true plan
wingless man walks in a world full of rocks and building blocking all sight
feeling drepressed for what hes done he wants to make things right
he makes a bomb for everything wrong he figures this will clear the way
but out of display for us all to pay he set it for today
but before the blast he looks at the past with a glimer of regreat
he hopes and prayes that the damage displayed we all will never forget
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Re: wingless man walks
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by lostrelic on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 07:11:50 PM AEST
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sorry i saw a few typos it should go
in his way he thought he would display a little of what he has won
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Re: wingless man walks
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by Candice on
Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 01:07:07 PM AEST
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You will get this comment and think
NO NO NO! thats not what I meant but I thought suicide bomers....It's not souicide bomers is it. No well.
Anyway it was beautifull thanx |
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