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Time Machine
Contributed by
panther_1978
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Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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If I had a time machine
I would go back in time,
to the one that I went to fast for
the one that I thought was for life…
to when we first met and tell myself that to take it slow
Like the old Peabody cartoon
and his "Way Back Machine"…
But I guess my heart wanted hers so bad,
I guess I couldn't see that
I was pushing her so hard.
Just wanted to make her happy,
wanted her to see how well
she could be treated
but I don't know where I went wrong,
although I know what I did incorrect
in I treated her heart like it was mine,
I do that sometimes…
But I think the reason I did that
was because I thought we was meant to be together
meant to show each other true love…
meant to be in our lives together
I know some day that may still happen
but who knows where our hearts will be then?
Who knows how you or I will feel about each other?
Will I still cherish you? Yes, nothing ever will change that,
Will I still love you? Yes, I will always love you?
It wont be easy to leave your heart behind,
But I guess I will have too………………
Because I know what we did was wrong,
We went way to fast… I wish that I could change that
but I can't change history or the past.
I will just tell myself to take it slower the next time!
That's what I planned to do with her heart,
But I didn't… and I'm regretting it now…
That I could have been a little slower,
on her heart, not went so fast.
But I do know this…
I will always call you by
your beautiful name
My beautiful Blue-Eyed Angel!
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panther_1978
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2003-01-25 10:30:00]
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Re: Time Machine
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by Dani on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 04:59:20 PM AEST
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Awww... Panther with a heart like yours, the girls should be lining up. ;) (I would, lol...) This is beautiful and honest... I hope whomever it is for reads it and takes it to heart
This non rhyming style looks good on ya by the way... Good write
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Re: Time Machine
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by Panther_1978 on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 07:01:14 PM AEST
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| Well, I like ryming poetry but my style of writing is with non-ryming words... I feel that you can express yourself better with non-ryming poetry but thats just me.... Thank you Dani :) |
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Re: Time Machine
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 09:40:50 AM AEST
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| Panther this was so heartfelt,your love is strong,we all wish we could go back in time to change things! This was a great peice! Christina |
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