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A flip flop of lives-cauchy3
Contributed by
cauchy3
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Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 08:53:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A flip flop of lives (poem).
Great big carrots are citations.
Rabbit holes are power grooves.
Cunning, catchy and catty to assign!
To dicker a lot but is good to mooch.
As you pick up your very bad holidays.
Different additions are all doing.
Strips of gods are arbors to times?
Strip searchers are not naked minds.
Moneys are good when powers are fit.
Try to finish your treats with tricks.
Each part is to flip a coin.
When you are buy off your life’s flip flops.
--------Cheung Shun Sang=Cauchy3--------
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Re: A flip flop of lives-cauchy3
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by Gracen2260 on
Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 07:18:14 PM AEST
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| Innovative and very creative write. I enjoyed this poem a great deal. Nice Job! |
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Re: A flip flop of lives-cauchy3
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by Midnight on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 06:02:52 PM AEST
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| its a good poem. I like it alot. It's very creative and very a good idea at that. although it probaly could be more so, you know, it could be a bit bette and more flowing and poetic. but for now you did great job. by all means keep writing. I guese for some reson I have a very strong felling that if you just do a little more and arrange the words a little differently you cuold make something out of your self with this poem. but make saure you keep writing and remember dont get mad at mistakes learn from them and you will become even greater than your mind wants you to be. thank you I enjoyed reading your poem alot. |
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